Gay.

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Op 23 december 2004 19:08 schreef Greycloak het volgende:
Gay.

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hahahaha

Het begint nu weer een beetje te veel huppeltjesgoth in het sprookjesbos te worden.

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Op 23 december 2004 13:15 schreef spectre het volgende:
hier kunnen alle hippies hun tekstjes kwijt

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en alle zeurkousen hun kritiek

Treefistfuckingdeerhumping hippies
vroegah sloegen we jullie gewoon op jullie kankahbek!

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh..............

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Op 23 december 2004 20:21 schreef Orion het volgende:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh..............

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Gaafh, zelf verzonnen die tekst?

[Dit bericht is gewijzigd door Greycloak op 23-12-2004 20:28]

je komt op me debuut cd :

Fryslân boppe! Groningen&brabant yn'e groppe!!

ok dit topic is zo te zien al bijna jaar niet meer in gebruik,zal vast wel goede reden voor zijn.
maar goed ik dacht ik rakel het weer ff op, zien of dr op doorgegaan word

schrijf zelf ook al jaren gedichten dus tja, ben er wel in geinteresseerd.

ok genoeg gelult, hier ff een van mijn gedichten:

“give me the darkness”
20-1-04

In the darkness you came
O darling of my dreams
Your pale skin a mask
Of the true feelings inside

The midnight hour is near
And we’re dancing
Dancing in the night
As if we were the only ones

Time is running out
O darling, say it’s not so
Our dance is over
For we must return home

Daylight comes
The people awakening
Stepping into the world
To be what’s expected from them

The daylight consuming us
With it’s rules and pain
The sunshine bright as fire
Burning us up inside

Give me the night
O darling, give me darkness
Let me enjoy the peace
And silence of it all

For I live in daylight
Like all the others
Yet during midnight hour
I’m truly alive

*~~ Black sun~~*

zien jullie meteen de reden van mijn naam, is al jaren mijn pseudoniem.
kom maar op, is het gay, is het goed, is het net te doen, fire at will

weer wat recent materiaal:

Set In Stone

I have come from a faraway land
To fight my enemies and claim what belongs to me
As I swear revenge, I shall have the head
Of the one that slew my love so brutally

Where the blood of the ones who died in vain
Slowly flows into the stream of memories
Moments shared so lovingly shall remain eternally

Songs of battles so grim and epic fights
Our warcries proudly sounding in the fading light
As the sun has set, and the night awakes
We shall march towards our fate

For now it’s time for another war
One that rages more than all the ones before
Fighting like there will not be a morn’
If I die, I’d proudly fall
I would proudly fall for you

Where the hammer strikes first
My rage shall shake the ground
Merciless into the fray

The northern winds blow coldest as the storm is raging on
Yet my heart tells me this is my only home
Though I have come from lands below
My heart is bound to these hills and their purest white snow
This is where I belong

And yet I stand alone at dawn
A shadow of the man I’ve known in another life
The virgin snow falling from the morning sky
Covers the words carved on my stone

"From the moment we were born
Our doom has been decreed
No glorious end to this lost battle
Our fate is set in stone

Time is stolen, not granted
In vain is all achieved in this life
To dust all this will crumble
In the end everything dies"

Moeten er nou altijd weer wijven in die teksten voorkomen. Zing toch gewoon over dat je iemand de hersens inslaat....

"on a quest to kill M. (and a red dragon full of flames or steel metal and epic glory)"


The night draws near, the M. is stirring
Lurking behind a tree i see a dwarf that is irrelevant to this story.
A story unfolds before my very eyes as we gaze into the dragon's lair..

TO KILL THE M. !! HEAVY METAL!!

in the niiiiiight, this night of evil stuff from lands not so close to my own.

Killing the M. (8x)

We're killing the M. for the glory of our king.

Killing the M.
fight win prevail!
We'll crack his skull
Killing the M.





zo beter?

Als songteksten ondergoed waren, dan was die eerste een kapotte tijgerstring, en die tweede een uitgelubberde van de Wibra, zeg maar. Er zit dus wel progressie in.

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Op 19 november 2005 1:08 schreef M. het volgende:
Moeten er nou altijd weer wijven in die teksten voorkomen. Zing toch gewoon over dat je iemand de hersens inslaat....

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“no strings attached”

Screw you, you don’t deserve me
You know this very well
Fuck you, I hate you
Just go straight to hell

you used me
you were lying
Excuses
Just for trying

You were afraid
We talked it out
I was so happy
Now I’m gonna shout

Tears of joy
Tears of sorrow
Everyday hoping
For good things tomorrow

You say you want
No strings attached
Fuck you, like all the others
You’re lying behind my back

I really thought you were different
I really thought you were the one
I hate it that now I hate you
But it’s your own fault for what you’ve done

*~~ Black Sun ~~*


ok ik sla m niet echt zn hersens in, maar tis wel very pissed off bedoeld..... beter?
jaja die opmerking was geloof ik niet voor mij maar ach...LB

[Dit bericht is gewijzigd door BlackSun op 19-11-2005 1:16]

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Op 19 november 2005 1:14 schreef M. het volgende:
Als songteksten ondergoed waren, dan was die eerste een kapotte tijgerstring, en die tweede een uitgelubberde van de Wibra, zeg maar. Er zit dus wel progressie in.

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Gelukkig hoef ik niets voor jou te schrijven

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Op 19 november 2005 1:23 schreef Lainedil Naleanor het volgende:


Gelukkig hoef ik niets voor jou te schrijven

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Dat genoegen is idd geheel wederzijds

Al zouden de nummers over het schedelkrakende geluid dat jouw strings maken wel enorm aanslaan bij het TMF-publiek

Maar even serieus.

Was het niet mogelijk om nog meer clichés in je Set in Stone tekst te verwerken?

Ik haat nummers over vrouwen. Zoveel aandacht verdienen ze nou ook weer niet.

Even een leuk liedje dan, sinds kort een nieuwe personal favorite.

~Think About You~

Say baby you been lookin' real good
I remember when we met
Funny how it never felt so good
It's a feelin' that I know
I know I'll never forget
Ooh it was the best time I can remember
Ooh and the love we shared - is lovin' that'll last forever

There wasn't much in this heart of mine
There was a little left and babe you found it
Funny how it never felt so good
It's a feelin' that I know
I know I'll never forget
Ooh it was the best thing I can remember
Ooh and the love we shared - is lovin' that'll last forever

I think about you
Honey all the time my heart says yes
I think about you
Deep inside I love you best
I think about you
You know you're the one I want
I think about you
Darlin' you're the only one
I think about you

Somethin' changed in this heart of mine
An I'm so glad that ya showed me
Honey now you're my best friend
I wanna stay together to the buryin'
Ooh it was the best time I can remember
Ooh and the love we shared - is lovin' that'll last forever

Nu heeft de lyric tieper niet heel goede orne, maar close enough

Grrrr.

"Je moeder"

Je moeder kanker ende aids
Je vader met zijn stoma al weken in coma
Je vriendin verkracht
o jee wat een pracht

ah minder leuke liedjes over meisjes dan:

Fuck Your Arse With Broken Glass

Bent across the wall, held she cannot budge
With the broken bottle in my hand I cut her arse like fudge
Blood pours on my shirt, the wench begins to whine
As violent pain and agony tickles up her spine

He laughs and licks his lips as her bowels drop on the floor
Watching as she floods the ground with putrid grime and gore
The pain inside it gets too much, his victim passes out
He stamps and hits and batters hard nad kicks her while she's down

Rectal rape with splintered glass
pushed with force up the victims arse
Razor slices need to be stitched
as the arse cheeks split to bits

Feeling numb, beaten, abused
Lying still. after being abused

Fuck...Your...Arse...With broken glass
Fuck your arse with broken glass

These sick pleasures people find
>From raping people from behind

Bent across the wall, held she cannot budge
Bottle in my hand, I cut her arse like fudge
Blood pours on my shirt, the wench begins to whine
Pain and agony tickles up her broken spine

Fuck...Your...Arse...With broken glass
Fuck your arse with broken glass

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Op 19 november 2005 1:01 schreef BlackSun het volgende:
In the darkness you came

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huhuhuhuhuhuh